English Homework Help!?
Can you tell me if I put the commas in the right place for these two sentences: 1. Many advantages of the diesel locomotive to be found in the electric locomotive, however, the electric locomotive still has some drawbacks. 2.Electric train operations can be profitable but only in areas with high population density. 3. Large, dense populations are found in many cities, Tokyo, New York, New Delhi and Paris. 4. During the 2nd World War, most of the railroads did not use Stean or electric power trains. 5. While the railroads in the United States swithcing diesel trains, A similar trend was occurring worldwide. 6. In 1957 all trains in America, except a few were diesel powered. Do I have to add the word "such" before the word "Tokyo" in # 3.
1. It's a comma splice. "electric locomotive, however," The comma after however, is correct and the comma before it nevertheless should be a semicolon or a period and still use to start a new sentence. 2. Arts. 3. The semicolon after cities should be a COLON: "the cities, Tokyo, New York, New Delhi and Paris" 4. Well. 5. Well. 6. Fine.
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